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ideas are all around us just waiting to be snapped up.
Be
a detective and carry a notebook and pencil.
1.
Watch the people in the playground/ at the football/ in the supermarket.
Choose 1 person to describe – hair, clothes, eyes, skin.
2.
What if that person suddenly fainted/ pulled out a gun/ began to transform
into an alien?
Write
a report of the incident for the school newspaper.
3.
Now pretend that you are the person you chose to describe and re-write
your report as a story.
The
idea for my novel Leaving no Footprints came while I was walking along
the beach with my dog. A boy and his dog walked past me and I noticed that
neither of them had left any footprints on the sand.
Was
this a real boy and a real dog?
Or
had I imagined them?
They
seemed real, but what sort of magic allowed them to walk on the beach without
leaving any trace of their presence?
Write
your own answer to this puzzle.
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How
did last week’s stories turn out?
Even
if they’re not very good, don’t throw them away.
You
never know when another idea is going to come along and crash into one
of them.
Some
stories need two ideas to join together and spark each other off.
1.
Think of an exotic name.
2.
Describe a person who fits that name.
Add
family members, pets.
Where
does the person live?
3.
Write a diary entry describing one day in this person’s life.
Many
years ago, while I was struggling to write The Watching Lake , I read a
book by Eleanor Nilsson. Her advice was to spend 10 minutes writing every
day. It doesn’t sound very long but, as she said, 10 minutes can easily
turn into an hour when you’re having fun. Even if you have to stop for
homework or music practice, just getting out your story and looking at
it will be enough to keep it fresh so that in the shower or on the school
bus or any time during the day, your story will keep on writing itself
in your head.
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Have
you tried writing for ten minutes a day yet?
How
many times did you have to stop to do your maths assignment, clean up your
room or visit your least favourite relative?
4.
Write a blow by blow description of something you often do, like, get out
of bed/ eat an apple/ clean your teeth.
5.
Now describe the same action as if you were
4.
a three year old
5.
a ninety three year old.
Don’t
forget to add the dialogue. The way your characters speak tells your reader
a lot about them.
Which
description was the easiest to write?
Here
is a riddle for you to try.
The
dedication in my novel Graffiti on the Fence reads:
"For
Cameron and Amy whose grandmother plays the witch"
Q.
Who are Cameron and Amy?
Write
it down on a piece of paper and check below for the answer.
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Did
you guess the answer to the riddle?
A:
Cameron and Amy are my grandchildren.
Lally,
in Graffiti on the Fence, is not exactly me but I gave her my voice. Usually
I have to imagine the voices of my characters. Lally’s voice was already
there. I had a lot of fun writing that book, but I can never give a character
my own voice again. If they don’t have different voices, they don’t come
to life on the page.
6.
Imagine that your car has run out of petrol. The driver can’t leave the
sleeping baby, so you are sent to find out where the nearest petrol station
is. You ask a well dressed lady, an old tramp, a scruffy teenager.
7.
Write down each person’s reply using expressions like ‘Yeah, man’/ ‘Oh,
dear me!’/ ‘Nah, mate’.
8.
Experiment with letters to make sounds. ‘Aww’/ ‘Garn’/ ‘So-o-o-o sorry
daahling’.
Inside
those speech commas, you can break all the rules!
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Don’t
let your characters lie down flat on the page while you tell the story.
Get
them up walking, talking, feeling the wind in their hair.
9.
Change a telling sentence into a showing one.
In
my novel Winning, Mr Crowe is the school gardener from hell.
Telling:
"Mr
Crowe screamed at Pearce and Yosef because he had just finished marking
out the lanes with his white-line marker and the boys smudged them."
Showing:
"‘That’s
it!’ Mr Crowe screamed at Pearce and Yosef when one of his white lines
got smudged. ‘I’m going to have you boys banned from this oval!’"
10.
Match an action with a reaction:
"Mr
Crowe abandoned his white-line marker and stormed up to the office.
‘We
didn’t mean to, Mr Crowe,’ Pearce called after the old buzzard."
11.
Try using metaphor/simile:
"Early
next morning there was a bee hive buzz of excitement in the schoolyard.
The news passed from one person to another like the common cold. There
had been a break-in overnight."
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How
did you go with metaphors/similes?
Like
adjectives (and salt in food) too much can ruin the flavour.
Mixing
tenses can also destroy your story very quickly.
12.
Describe one meal that you had at the weekend - where, when, what and who
with?
13.
Rewrite your description as if it was happening now.
14.
Write about the same meal as if you are planning to have it in the future.
Which
description was easier to write?
Which
one is the most interesting to read?
The
present tense is great for getting inside your character:
‘Shut
up!’ I yell.
I
wait for Enya to protest. It’s the least she can do. She complains. I shout
back. That’s the way it should be. That’s what I’d do.
(
from Someone Like Me ).
But
it does mean that you can only tell the story from one point of view.
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Things
you know about usually make the best stories.
When
I first tried to write my novel Straggler’s Reef, I had Karri going back
in time to meet Caroline in the 1840s. I sent it to my publisher. She sent
it back. I rewrote it, sent it again – again and again it came back. I
could only make it work by bringing Caroline from 1840 in to the present
– the world I know best.
15.
Describe an event that you remember really well.
Perhaps
the most scary or
Embarrassing
or
exciting
thing that has ever happened to you.
How
did it feel, taste, smell, sound?
16.
Remember to show, not tell.
17.
Read your work again. Does the dialogue sound real?
Would
Mum say ‘I will most certainly help you up,’ when she finds you have fallen
off your bike and cut your knee? Or would she cry out, ‘Oh, darling, are
you alright?’
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How
did your scary/embarrassing/exciting stories go?
18.
Re-read the one you like best.
19.
Exaggerate the main event.
20.
Now ask yourself some what if questions.
What
if the noises in your roof at night are not made by rats but by a lost
tribe of gnomes?
What
if your resident cockroaches have been eating a new GM type of mushroom
and have grown as big as cats?
What
if the gnomes enlist your help to poison the cockroaches, but the poison
turns them into humanoids?
Remember
you don’t have to return the whole world to normal. Give your story a surprising
twist at the end. Or leave it open so that the reader can decide which
of the possible endings they believe in.
A
story with an open ending will often stay alive in the reader’s imagination
long after one where everything is carefully spelt out.
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