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Hope of a father
The old man stood at the edge of the clearing; watching, waiting, hoping, like he did every night. A movement on the horizon made his heart leap ... but moments later it sank, as he realised it was only an animal. Hour after hour passed, until finally he had to admit that tonight wouldn't be the night. Dejected, the old man walked home. His son greeted him at the door. One look at his father's face told him that he had been disappointed, yet again. "I'm so sorry, Father," he said gently, as he took the old man's outer garments. "I don't understand," the old man sighed, as he sat down. "For years I have prayed, and for years I have been sure that I've heard God say, 'soon'. Have I hoped all these years in vain?" The son shook his head slowly, and fetched a blanket. The old man lay down, and slept. Early the next morning, the old man arose from his slumber. His son was still asleep, he would arise with the dawn. The old man donned his sandals, opened the door of the tent that was his home, and walked across the sand to his watching place, as he did every morning. Deep in prayer, he spoke to God until the sun came up. It was time to go home, to tend to the sheep, but again he was sure he Had heard his God say, "soon". The day's work was done. It was early evening, and the old man ate his evening meal before returning to his watching place on the edge of the clearing. Soon, the meal was finished, and the old man made his way across the sand. As the sun touched the horizon, the old man perceived a moment on the horizon. His heart leaped, his eyes focused hard on the object. The object drew nearer, the old man's heart beat faster, the object grew clearer, the old man leaped to his feet and ran toward the object, forgetting all the cultural taboo on such an action. He ran, he ran until he held in his arms his heart's desire, the substance of the years of hope, of prayer. "My son," he wept. "My son!"
The young man in his arms pulled back, and began to speak. "I don't care what you have done. You are my son, and you have returned. We must rejoice!"
The old man returned to the camp with the boy, who looked humbly around. The older son, the faithful son, came out from the tent.
The father looked warmly into the older son's eyes. | |||||
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A note from the author My muse was dancing when I wrote this. I was thinking of the story of the prodigal son, and I got to thinking about the parable from the father's point of view. The parable Jesus told us speaks of a father's love, and willingness to forgive, so I wanted to potray the longing of the father to welcome his son home. Hopefully, the essence of the original parable remains. |
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